The Children of the Beast - Comments

Hi Rupert, just read you're story took me over 2 hours to read :p, it was better than i thought it was gunna be, it was gd, i could picture everything that was happening. well done (im not being sarcastic by the way it really was good) Lol took the names from people from our school :p

remember i when first rote this i had a massive crush on danni, i rote the story based around my feeling at the time, i cant change the story now.
but thanks

Yo
This is really good!
I am so cool in it XD
And you and Danni ....-shifty eyes-
Shouldn't it be you and Lil....
Hehe
Ly
XD
Danii
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Well done. It's good :D

its good =]

k thanks could u tell me how to change the colour of writing please

ohhh very good
but you possibly need someone to go over it coz there are a few mistakes in there =]
i would be happy to, if you want me too
ttyl
Ly
Danii Danger
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