Wow... that is all I can possibly say about the first chapter, wow. I liked how you approached the beginning of the story, you put a little mystery into the two girls until later on. I liked it.
The ending of the chapter was very unexpected, like NaitomeAsian07 said before. This story has caught my attention and I hope you keep writing it. I am subscribing.
The ending of the chapter was very unexpected, like NaitomeAsian07 said before. This story has caught my attention and I hope you keep writing it. I am subscribing.