Wendy - Comments

OHMY!!! this was great!!! I love all the details!!! You're a great writer! <3

Well done! I have never before read Peter Pan under this lighting. You captured Pan's innocent boyishness so very well!
I LOVED Pan's interpretation of the night time sky. Very creative. I've never, ever thought of the sky like that before.
Wendy was very real. Very easy to relate to. I've never thought of Wendy as maturely as you wrote her. Before reading this I still fancied her as far more childish. Your Wendy was amazing though! It opened a whole new way for me to view the story of Peter Pan.
I understand that it was required for the story, but I did not like how hopelessly despaired she was at times during the story. I cannot imagine anyone being so melancholy in such a beautiful place surrounded by such majesty as you depicted.

Overall a *wonderful* piece of literature. It was a pleasure to read.

Thank you!
Emily

I really like this. It's so well written and it has a good message :) nice job! :D

Brilliant! Fantasy, fairy tales -- they're really neat. :)
I like this. Great work! :)

Mannn, I'm so glad to see Peter Pan fanfics <3 Peter is such awesomesauceeeee

I really like this story.
it was amazingly well written.
i've always been a fan of peter pan myself.