Ah it's been quite a while since I've seen some good Warhammer stories around here. Most of the authors just abandon their projects or don't update here no mibba, which is a shame really.
First of all, I'm impressed with your familiarity with the lore. I also appreciate your writing style - the story is conveyed in a very clear manner and I think it can also be appreciated by those not so familiar with the Warhammer world.
All in all, it was very interesting and I hope you will update here when you can. Also, thanks for presenting your other fanfiction accounts here, I'm sure there are lots of stories worth checking out there.
First of all, I'm impressed with your familiarity with the lore. I also appreciate your writing style - the story is conveyed in a very clear manner and I think it can also be appreciated by those not so familiar with the Warhammer world.
All in all, it was very interesting and I hope you will update here when you can. Also, thanks for presenting your other fanfiction accounts here, I'm sure there are lots of stories worth checking out there.
In fact, I think I will do that right away.