I Wanna be Your Last, First Love - Comments

  • JillNotJillian

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    Awe I want Taylor to be with Matt now. They seem so cute together but then Michael would be crushed again like when she dated that James guy in HS. Keep up the stupendous work!!!
    August 17th, 2011 at 03:53pm
  • MaybeitsBee

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    Your writing is amazing [:
    It really blew me away.
    I can't wait to read more from you and AWESOME story, too :D
    April 17th, 2010 at 03:55pm
  • MissLis

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    oh lord that first chapter really made me cry... I could really feel every single emotion running through her and it was horrible
    but I know the feeling of wanting to shove something out of your life, because it hurts too much, even if that's a stupid decision later on...

    can't wait to read more of this!
    April 16th, 2010 at 01:25pm
  • scute

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    After I was finished, I whispered a small thank you. To that, he replied ‘Anything for you’, and as my heart melted we said goodbye. -- while I'm all for mdz in the long run, I'm currently team Matt. Everything he says just makes me swoons little bit more. don't hurt himmm ): lol

    Matt peeled off his sweatshirt showing a plain white v-neck under shirt -- I just found this too delicious to not comment on. Something about a guy in a white v-neck really drive me crazy... okay...

    alrighty so, again, I love it. I'm not entirely sure if I want her to be over michael, however Matt is a fantastic distraction :D
    April 16th, 2010 at 02:50am
  • Jessica;

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    Awww noooooo.
    I like Matt and all but he's not Michael...obviously.
    He is being very sweet to her though.
    Gah, they're just all over the place.
    More soon. <3
    This is honestly one of my fave stories on mibba.
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    April 16th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • mully17

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    Awww this is going to get interesting me thinks! and cough cough hope that character still shows up lol i make a good best friend to her and hes well cute
    April 16th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • jejune.

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    This chapter was fierce.
    Ohh Michael...How I love him so.
    The boy finally came around :] WIN.
    Please update soon ; I can't wait to know what happens next !!
    March 12th, 2010 at 06:08pm
  • Jessica;

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    The way you write is amazing.
    It's simple but so fluid.
    I know that makes no sense but I really enjoy reading it.
    And this story is amazing.
    I'm glad Michael finally admitted all of that, even if it took him like forever.
    More soon. <3
    March 12th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • mully17

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    Ahhh if you don't start updating sooner so help me!!!! Haha
    March 12th, 2010 at 04:03am
  • mully17

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    Ahhh if you don't start updating sooner so help me!!!! Haha
    March 12th, 2010 at 04:03am
  • jejune.

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    I know I already told you this, but I love the update <3
    Liz needs to fall off a cliff. She and Michael are obviously not meant for each other.
    I think Michael will come around and realize Taylor is just perfect for him. And from your description, she sounds like a HOTTIE. :D
    More soooon pleaseee.
    February 12th, 2010 at 02:40am
  • Jessica;

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    I'm hooked on this story.
    And I too hope Michael is not in love.
    More soon. <3
    February 12th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • mully17

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    OK seriously I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Remember just now that I am a blueshirts fan!
    February 11th, 2010 at 06:17am
  • Jessica;

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    This is amazing.
    You write the emotions so well...my heart was wrenched for her.
    And damn, he would have a gf.
    Let's hope Taylor makes a good impression.
    More soon.
    :]
    January 26th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • mully17

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    Okay i love love this story!!! and if u add a certain character in cough cough! i need to be in then lol or ill have marc staal lol lol i love this story
    January 24th, 2010 at 09:35am
  • smooey89

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    I love this story!
    awe.... he has a girlfriend ?! sigh...
    pooor taylor..
    please update soon =)
    January 23rd, 2010 at 06:12pm
  • jejune.

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    This story is addictive. :D I love it...You've got huge talent and it shines in this. :)
    January 20th, 2010 at 04:00am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    I love the story! My heart broke when he said he had a girlfriend! I hope she looks so good that Michael doesn't know what hit him
    January 19th, 2010 at 04:18am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    I love the story! My heart broke when he said he had a girlfriend! I hope she looks so good that Michael doesn't know what hit him
    January 19th, 2010 at 04:18am
  • MandyBea

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    I Love this story!
    update soon!!! :)
    January 19th, 2010 at 03:05am