Date Rape - Comments

Brendon being firty, spencer being awkward, Jon being "I'm just trying to be normel" and Ryan being date raped you are AMAZING!

lol i loved this i literaly had tears in my eyes from giggling so much. XD

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“That’s coral,” said Spencer.


I loved it. :3

I laughed so hard at this!
I loved it! :D

*laughs* I love this. It made me laugh :D

Bahahaha that cracked me up i love the line "its called date rape babe" XD

OMG I loved it =P

This was cute. You got to the point about where this story was heading, so that's a good thing.
There were a few mistakes though, if you don't mind me pointing them out.

It had took him forever
I believe it should be: It had taken him forever

That ‘just gotta bed look’
This part confused me a bit. I think you might want to reword so readers can understand better.

“Keep the flirting down, the show is about to start."
I really think there should be a comma instead of the 'and'. It's much clear that way.

I hope this helped a bit. :D

I love this.
The endign made me
It's just... wow!