Falling nightmares - Comments

awww. that was sad. update soon please!

That's a strange dream. I wonder what it's about.

Love it! please continue!

Love it! Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Update!
I love this story !

oh damn thats brutal update soon pleassseee

some gramatical mistakes, but great!

Fantastic like twilight, but different
Very good descriptions
Grammatical errors
Always spell check before posting
other than that
AWESOME
^.^

Over all it was well written.

Except this part isn't written correctly:
He looked no over than 30 years old.

I think you menat to put:
He looked no older than 30 years old.

The first chapter as whole based off of what happens was just an okay to me.
It seemed to drag out at the end. In my personal opinion I think the nightmare should have been more focused on.

It was good, but I think her dream should have been more focus on with the intertwining of her sister and parents rather than pulling a little sub-plot out. Because it came off sort of boring to me, but yeah it's only the start.

So I give it a 6 out of 10.

I'll read more soon.

awh! its so cute..thanks for letting me know...please comment on my stories... =D

She had lunch with the preppy girl didn't she???
but I like how you make Ciara's emotions run wild because
of Justin...

I'm sorry I haven't commented the new chapters but
I've been a little busy... but I do love it! It still seems
to reach out and grab my attention and curiousity.

hi.
so I like the idea for this. it has major potiential.
you do have grammer mistakes but you know I can't
really say anything about that because haha I am horrible
when it comes to my own grammer. I am curious though as to
where it's going to go. over all I think you did a good job!
I think I'll subscribe then.

Once again, I own the virginity...

Well, seein' as I've already read it... I don't got much to say.
BUT your set up is cool enough and you understood my tips right :D
... which I like because it means I do occasionally say something that actually makes sense. lol.
So anyway... I'll subscribe for ya :D
Update soon, and you should design a layout. Story layouts are diff to profile ones and real simple.
Just go clickie on 'layouts' under the stories section on 'my mibba' and design one. Then go to your stories page and choose the layout you designed as the one you're gonna use for the story. Its a cinch.
Well... update soon :D
-Sas