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  • shawnyxpanda

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    this is the most beautiful story i've ever read. i laughed, i cried. i cried a lot. i got so emotional and my heart broke. i felt the whole story.
    you're an amazing writer and you will go very far. please, don't ever stop doing what you're doing.
    you have a gift.
    now show it to the world.
    October 4th, 2010 at 09:14am
  • precursors

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    Congrats! Your entry won first place :D
    February 6th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • precursors

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    With how upbeat the song is, I'd never expect something based on a lyric from it to be so... tragic. I absolutely love your writing style; so many metaphors that I've never read before. :)

    Great job :D
    January 9th, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • Gurl.

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    wonderful. <3
    January 9th, 2010 at 05:04am
  • Gurl.

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    loooove it! :D
    January 8th, 2010 at 01:33am
  • Forever Young.

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    omg..this was amazing. i can't even tell you how awesome it was.
    i can't wait for the next part (:
    January 7th, 2010 at 07:03am