Haunted - Comments

lil_angel666 (100)

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caity didnt u add more to this???
or havent you typed it up yet???
Well it's jus as good as the version u have at school so keep writting this one i want to know wat happens after the dance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

March 14th, 2010 at 07:12am

MorbidBARBIE (100)

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whaaat? please don't let her die!

January 7th, 2010 at 07:28am

MorbidBARBIE (100)

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ooohh, a cliff hanger they are nasty little buggers.. anywhoo. LOVE your story. i agree that the first chapter sets up the story. (:

January 6th, 2010 at 08:08am

vampire_lover666 (100)

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The first chapter definately sets up the rest of the story very well. I really like how Jake is so mysterious and somehow unwilling to talk to her despite the fact taht he seems to like her.

January 4th, 2010 at 02:50pm