January 24th, 2011 at 05:00am
WOAH!
Just when you thought he was all cool and collective, and wasnt such a shitbag it goes 360 and now you know that oli lied to his friends, just so he would seem more in control, and he would look like hes so cool and BLAH BLAH.
I Love this because its this girl, who is a hopeless romantic really. And shes stuck between a rock and a hard place. Her Friends cousin is really hot, Oliver, and when she thinks ( KEY WORD ) that he likes her, she goes for it and then finds out that he lied about things. If i was her, i would be off my fucking trolly. If he lied to hiss friends, he'll damm straight lie to you to! What the fuck is stopping him! See how worked up this story gets me! its all yerr faultt.
you need to update, like soon. Because this is so fucking good and i check if this story is updated every 5 minutes and i get so dissapointed. Asking for too much? I dont really know, but i do know that this story has a really good plot. Im certain it will be heading places, and will get people on the edge of there seatt.
Anyways, back to oliver being a dickheadd. it got me somewhat dissapointed that he would be so ... Ehh. I cant even find the wordd. OHH! decieveingg, I spelled that wrong. no doubt. on purpose ;] no, i lied. not on purpose i have no idea how to spell ett. It got me more excited then mad though i was li: YEAH! you show him! beat his ass, whipp him! and i scrolled down some more and it didnt have another chapter and my heart broke :/
Anywayss, thanks for the kick ass story, its fucking marvelous. Keep doing your thing. its a pleasure reading your storyy.
I'm not even sure yet if Oli's a good guy or a real wanker!
I guess I'll find out, eh?
Update soooooon! : D
P.S.: Tom's freaking adorable. Hes like a giant kid! I'll date him! lol! : P