Language of Love - Comments

  • awww...i love it, things are finally getting back to normal!
    February 9th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • babies ! marriage proposals ! Russian ! oh my ; )
    February 9th, 2010 at 06:14am
  • Charlotte thanked God as Brianna finally finished, doing a rather impressive job seeing as she was about halfway to drunk.
    ohmygod... are you kidding me. really!!?!?! you're joking right?? i am SUCH a bad role model for my baby girl...

    Just as he wanted to reach out to her, remind her how much he loved her, and to think of him when she went out, she turned the corner, his fingers falling just short of her shoulder.
    oh noo.. that is sad...

    They arrived to the club a short drive later, the three girls singing along excitedly to the pop song on the radio, dancing with their arms up in the back seat.
    party in the USA moment??

    When he’s horny he just turns into two-hundred pounds of throbbing penis and says things he doesn’t understand!
    HAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! OH MY GOD! BEST. DESCRIPTION. EVER.

    Brianna giggled to herself as she concocted her own plan to get Charlotte and Evgeni back on the love boat.
    ohhhhhh boy..

    “My Charlotte.” He huffed quietly, lying back on the warm concrete, folding his arms over face. Charlotte blushed at how cute he could be when he was jealous. “I come next time.” He insisted, muffled through his arms.
    hahahahahhahahaha.... ohhh geno :D you're so cute with your broken english and your jealousy

    bsolutely doused from head to toe in sun block, a big floppy hat on her head and a gummy smile.
    jordan did it.. hehehehehe. can i just die from this image? jordan is the perfect dad. he loves that little girl so much he cant stand to be away from her...

    his kinky curls
    hehehehe i giggled at this

    “You are the super star.” He insisted. “You make me happy every day.” He struggled for the words, knowing she’d much prefer to hear this in English. “I only want you forever.” He insisted, brushing his finger against her cheek gently. “I want you as my wife and mother to my children, if you want me.” He finished, kissing her lips softly to the seal the deal.
    AW! KEEP HIM CHAR! HE LOVEEEEEEES YOU! and bravo to the great english geno!

    “Did… did you just ask me to be your wife?”

    “What if I did?”

    HOLY FUCK! YOU CANT STOP THERE!

    UPDATE. NOW! OHMYGOD. UPDATE PLEASE!?!?!
    OHMYGOD! OHMYGOD! WHAT IS THIS FUCKING CLIFFHANGING CRAP!?!? KARA!
    ohmygod. you seriously need to get on the updating train. i loved this.
    i love the friends and the bond and baby broooke!
    <3333 more soon please? because this was too good to not have more.
    February 9th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • aww Geno is such a cutie, and i really like this story. like REALLY like, keep it up and i hope geno has lots of pretty babies. ( my god would they be cute)

    when i watched the '08 finals after he lost i just wanted to hold and cuddle him and tell him it was gonna be okay......
    February 9th, 2010 at 05:29am
  • OMG!!!!
    i seriously DIED when ev was telling her all those things in english!! sooo adorable! its pretty much what every girl dreams of hearing from a man *sigh* :)
    February 9th, 2010 at 05:10am
  • Evgeni followed his girlfriend obediently, peeking over her shoulder as they walked to the empty bedroom where her portable crib was set up a mobile of little penguins hanging over it.

    YES! I can't decide if that or the onesie is better...
    It was sad to see a fight, but I have amazing confidence in you. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    February 9th, 2010 at 12:29am
  • Awww that was so sad :(
    I'm a new reader and already addicted to this story lol xD Please update again soon?!
    February 8th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • I liked this chapter, it showed the other side of a relationship. That things are hard sometimes.
    I really liked that it ended happy though. :D
    I'm glad she stood her ground and wasn't just like...OK let's have babies now.
    Still taken with Jordan having a baby - especially a baby girl.
    So cute.
    February 8th, 2010 at 08:28pm
  • Cutee
    : )
    February 8th, 2010 at 12:32pm
  • awwwwwww that onesie is ADORABLE!!!!!!!!! And I loved loved that chapter
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:05am
  • their first big fight :[ it was sad but necessary to give more depth to the relationship.
    they need to get married and have babies, order don't matter as long as they're together being adorable<3
    February 8th, 2010 at 04:53am
  • so sad!!!!
    :(
    i love them together so much its not even funny :) ♥
    February 8th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • ahh i love this storyy! and omg i thought they were gonna break up i almost had a heart attack! more soon!!

    hate to be a brat butttt "Ты такая нежная" is more like you are so gentle, there is another word for soft. sorry i had to throw my two cents in :)
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:50am
  • i love this!
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:36am
  • Haha, "I like you" "You're soft." "Do you understand me?" That made me grin like a complete fool afterwards. I love this story, all your stories really, and it makes me grin like a child who was shoved into a candy shop, being told to "go at it", when I see you updated. God, I love this one. One of my favourites. Really Cute.
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:18am
  • Awww, no fighting.
    And they really didn't solve it either.
    That makes me sad.
    Fix it?
    Please?
    More soon. <3
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:07am
  • Aww
    well the ending was sweet, sort of...
    February 8th, 2010 at 01:58am
  • Brooklyn Marie Staal was born on June thirteenth, two thousand nine at seven fifteen in the evening. She weighed eight pounds, five ounces and came out with thick tufts of blonde hair along with Brianna's big blue eyes.
    ohmygod. my baby girl is already perfect.

    Brooklyn squealed excitedly as Charlotte tickled her tiny, warm tummy that proudly proclaimed Sorry boys, my Daddy says I can’t date till I'm thirty. Something Jordan had bought before Brianna hatched.
    hehehehehehehehe <3! yessss I love this.

    He grinned, knowing exactly what she wanted before dipping his head down into her grasp.
    he would be an amazing dad if he knows what the baby wants :D that is like key!

    “Come on.” He insisted, grabbing her hip roughly before dragging her down the hall to their shared bedroom. If Charlotte wanted babies now, he’d give her babies now.
    OHHOTDAMN! and really.. having sex when my baby is in the other room.. well.. I supposed she is probably used to it.

    “Ev, you know I love you, and you know that I want to have children with you someday, but that day… isn’t now.” She exhaled softly. Evgeni could feel his heartbeat slow and sadness wash over him.
    ohhh noo.... things are about to get nasty...

    “Not fair, not fair.” Evgeni followed her into the hallway, shaking his head. “I speak English, you speak English.”
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO FUCKING HARD! YEEES!

    “Charlotte!” Evgeni shouted, making Brooklyn’s eyes widen.

    “Evgeni Vladimirovich Malkin! You do not shout in front of a baby.”

    YES! BE NICE!

    Against his chest supported by one of his arms was Brooklyn whose small face was nuzzled into his neck, her pacifier stuck in her mouth happily. She wanted to giggle at the sight, Evgeni’s mouth open and snoring as his head dropped back against the top of the couch.
    um oh my god. this is the SWEETEST picture EVER. I love babies and hot hockey playing men

    something more adventurous than a girlfriend who taught French at a high school and enjoyed playing with her pets on the weekend.
    ohh honey.. dont kid yourself.. he loves you!

    “Where’s my baby?” Jordan asked, the first words out of his mouth as he walked into the apartment.
    ohmygod. he is just fucking perfect.

    “Look!” He smiled excitedly, taking out his wallet, “wallet size!” He grinned, showing Charlotte his favorite photo of his newborn daughter sound asleep in the deep bowl of the Stanley Cup.
    AWW!!! THE TYPICAL ADORABLE PHOTO! jordan is so adroable. I'm glad charlotte is a good sport about it :D hehehehe

    but to see her cry tears that he caused would absolutely kill him.
    GOOD! you should NEVER make her cry malkin!

    “I can wait.” He offered her, as much as it pained him, he just wanted to see her happy. “As long as you want me to wait.”
    ohh my god! :D :D :D sooo adorable. and yeah he better be saying that.

    ohmygod. this was so sad but sofucking sweet.
    I like that they had a little fight. It's a good thing for them to fight and stuff. It make relationships stronger. It can't be sunny all the time. you need the rain oncea and awhile.
    I hope this doesn't make things bad between them. they are too cute to let a little argument get in the way of being together. but at the same time, a baby is kind of a big deal malkin! he should ask before he tries to impregnate her.
    I wonder if he might have planted a seeeed :D!
    more soon please??
    p.s. loveeee my baby <3
    February 8th, 2010 at 01:29am
  • omgosh, ev is so cute. i love this. its so fluffy and sweet :)
    February 7th, 2010 at 07:17am
  • winning the stanley cup AND a baby in the same night? thats pretty exciting :)
    LOOOOVVVVEDDD the update!!
    February 6th, 2010 at 06:32am