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  • Jon Toews

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    that was uber cute. Im in love with this story for two reasons : One its freaking adorable! and Two i speak both French (a little) and Russian (fluently). Update soon :)
    January 10th, 2010 at 07:51pm
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    cuuuuuuuute :D
    January 10th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • shoulderxholster

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    this is so amazingly wonderful. I can't even think of the proper words to describe how giggly this makes me feel inside.
    January 10th, 2010 at 05:26am
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    I mean't writer, blah. Got distracted from a fight between Canucks player and Flames player, didn't get there names though.
    January 10th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • Kirsten;;

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    I love this story as much as I love the Adam Burish one. You're a very good writer, making me love you more for the way you write. Thank you for mentioning it in your adam one or else I probably wouldn't have read it and subscribed. I am so happy, just watched their game against the leafs and so happy they won. I love them all, especially Crosby. I am babbling but I love your story is the main part of my babble. Update soon please. You're one of the artists I throughly enjoy.
    January 10th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • Sammich

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    The last part of chapter four was my favourite!
    The trick or treat thing was soooo friggin cute ! <3
    January 10th, 2010 at 12:23am
  • Miss Goldy Gopher

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    i love love love this.
    omg, its so cute.
    i love geno!
    January 9th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • gurlygirl87

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    I love this story!!! Can't wait for a the chapter!!! :)
    January 9th, 2010 at 03:51pm
  • life.in.technicolor

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    awww...this story is so cute!
    January 9th, 2010 at 10:58am
  • mully17

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    awwwwwwwwwww i definatly love love love love love this story! so adorable
    January 9th, 2010 at 10:00am
  • jessesgirl407

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    this is soooooooooo adorable!!!
    he's just too cute, and oh i just like this story soo much :D
    January 9th, 2010 at 07:53am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Awwwwwh !
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    January 9th, 2010 at 01:25am
  • scute

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    CUTEST CHAPTER EVER?
    yes? i think so

    i love the how everything was basically in quotes, because we all know those weren't lessons. geno is spittin' some game and someone's going to get laid.

    i love this so much. i can't WAIT for moreeeeeeee
    January 8th, 2010 at 07:40pm
  • Jessica;

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    They are so damn ADORABLE.
    I loved the ending.
    They have a good group going there and I hope Max doesn't get too upset about it.
    More soon. <3
    January 8th, 2010 at 07:00pm
  • nolongerhere

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    Oh! This makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
    Aww is the only thing I can really say.
    hahahaha
    January 8th, 2010 at 05:52pm
  • loadedexcuses

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    the ending on that chapter was impossibly adorable.<3
    i'm so happy this is all light and fluffy. it's too cute for words!
    January 8th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • xolovepensxo

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    aww genoo <33
    update again soon (:
    January 8th, 2010 at 03:37pm
  • Lady Looch

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    “You like Alexander more than me.” Evgeni pouted comically, his big brown eyes looking absolutely pathetic as he stood in front of her in the spacious apartment.
    hahahhaa yeah. right geno.

    He lightly pet and played with Charlotte’s unbelievably soft hair, feeling the wisps as they twisted around his block-like fingers, the vanilla aroma hugging his sense into a divine submission.
    HAHAHAHAHAHA! you know why I'm laughing at this.w ho does this remind me of?? "Bay has soft hair"

    “Shh.” He cooed, rubbing his big hand up and down her back comfortingly. For all he knew, this was his new favorite movie ever if it meant that he got to hold Charlotte like this.
    HAHAHAHAHHA! that's funny :D

    Charlotte shyly opened the door, stepping into the bedroom, squeaking when she saw Jordan laying on the bed, tossing a tennis ball up and down as he laid on his back.
    hahahahhaha. way to go me. :p

    “We all have our… extra curricular activities.” She grinned mischievously, hanging the costumes back up except the leopard print two-piece that she planned on wearing herself to the party at Marc-Andre’s place.
    i get it.. i totally get it.. hahahahaha/

    “Come on, off with it.” Brianna giggled as she dropped her own coat just as Jordan did, revealing his rather small, leopard print shorts and the vines that crossed his back and front like suspenders.
    I'm trying to decide how I feel abou tthat image. i mean i like it.. but at the same time.. really jordan? hahahahahahahahahha

    It wasn’t long before Brianna was sloppy drunk, Joyce was hanging off of Max for support, and Charlotte was poised in Evgeni’s lap on the couch
    always the sloppy one. obviously. at least joyce still has some dignity

    “Treat.” Charlotte’s light and airy giggle was silenced as Evgeni’s lips pressed to hers in a sweet, slow kiss.
    OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

    okay. I am so happy I got to read this before school.
    love id. I loved the party and the costums. lol the image of sid made me laugh for sure.
    I love howmax is still all.. yoooo you cant go out like that. made me laigh
    *Sigh* this would be longer but it's 6:45 and i have to get ready!
    <333333333333333
    January 8th, 2010 at 01:45pm
  • deletemyaccount

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    LOL. Nice pretty. This story is so cute!

    I think the French at the beginning said something like, have a good day, don't forget your homework due wednesday and something with the number 10.
    I've only taken french for 3 years so I'm not sure. :p
    January 8th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Yes, your French is wrong at the beginning. I spent like, 20 minutes trying to figure it out...Hahaha sorry, but from a francophone's perspective it was...awkward.

    Anyway, I subscribed to this earlier and promptly forgot about it so thanks for updating! This is such a cute story. I'm happy you took the time to fully develop your characters, which is evident in the different personality quirks that are embedded within the narration. The omniscient perspective was a great choice, allowing the readers the necessary insight to see the developing relationships. Plus, you're just making everything so adorable! Who can resist?
    January 8th, 2010 at 04:04am