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  • FearTheWombat

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    :D awesome. Update love
    March 10th, 2011 at 05:46am
  • Gred.and.Forge

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    I <3
    :3
    Update, yes?
    February 9th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • xKillx'EmxAllx911

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    k so I just wanted to leave this little note saying: I fucking love this so pleeeeaaassse update when you can! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :):):):)
    May 11th, 2010 at 05:26am
  • larsus

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    Asshole Gerard is probably my favorite kind because when he is, he turns into a gangsta. File
    It's not a bad thing.

    This was awesome, by the way.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 06:31pm
  • rocknrolljunkie989

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    You apparently have a fantastic talent at writing, because everything I've read by you has drawn me and I loved every minute of it.
    Anyway, you perfectly blended the horrible reality of overcoming alcoholism with humor. I cracked up when I read the part about the stripper pole and the monkey with the joint. It was absolutely hilarious!
    Keep writing. With the things you can pull off, you'll definitely be getting somewhere with these.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 07:26am
  • larsus

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    Honestly, I'm not that into frerards, and this is the first one I have the actual want to read.

    I really like this.
    Arms
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:31am
  • McCookies.

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    This chapter made me giggle out loud. tehe
    I love them. Like a lot. ._.
    Especially Gee.
    March 9th, 2010 at 01:29am
  • Famous Friend.

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    I applaud you Teddy!
    That is amazing. I love the whole dialogue Frank has with himself and the way I can feel what he's going through and how hard it is for him.
    It just shows your ability to portray emotions and get them across perfectly.
    I'm so glad you posted it. :DD
    February 23rd, 2010 at 08:06am
  • McCookies.

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    Cheese CURSE THE SMILEYS NOT WORKING ON HERE NOW. SHITFUCKDAMNASS.

    Okay. In my mind, this incredible start of a story is dedicated to me, since I sent you the book and it took like a million years to get to you because when my stepdad took it to the post office he didn't know if the c I wrote in your name was an apostrophe or a C, like I would actually call you Con***** 'Hoe. He thought it was a pet name. wtf. -_-

    ANYWAY, sorry for rambling. I love the dialogue. I was grinning to whole time while I was reading it. I also love your voice. This works so well in the first person. Cheese And he's gay like Augusten. Naughty He can go to a gay rehab. (Or not, yenno.) The therapist seems pretty sexy though. And their banter has been dubbed as foreplay by me. File
    February 23rd, 2010 at 02:15am
  • larsus

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    I have been attempting to read this for hours, but every time I would sit down and start to read, I would be interrupted. I finally told myself whatever it was would have to wait until I could finish.

    I really liked this. It was detailed, but not overly so, which I find hard to do. Will there be more?
    I'd like to see more.
    ;D
    February 23rd, 2010 at 01:39am