The Sunrise of My Heart - Comments

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this was absolutely marvelous:3 and the profanity isnt to bad lol i think i probably say more bad words a day then in one of your chapters. I loved it though keep updating(:

Wonderful Chapter! Cant wait for the next one. honestly your one of my favorite authors/writers on this website(: i love the way you write your stories and i LOVE the idea of her reincarnation.

Brilliant update(:

Love it, please update. It's awesome that she reincarnated!

Thank you! As far as Draco goes, yes, their relationship will blossom again, it's just complicated right now because of Draco's obligations concerning Dumbledore.
As for the paragraphs, I'm sorry! I often have to type up chapters from my phone, which can be touchy and has different paragraph lengths than the computer, so they get all screwed up when I post.
And ending it at chapter 100...? It does have a nice appeal to it, and I have considered it. But if I did, her story wouldn't be finished.
Thank you so much for the encouragement and criticism! It's what keeps me writing! (:

Okay....
1. Great story line. I like the whole reincarnation thing. I mean, actually living and falling in love in many lives (with Padfoot and Godric) is a twist.
2. Her relationship with Draco is confusing me a bit. Will it ever blossom again?
3. I'm assuming it's going to follow the rest of Harry Potter, and Dumbledore will die. Is that why Draco is acting strange?
4. Please, for the love of all that is holy, separate your paragraphs. I sometimes get jumbled up while reading. Almost made me stop. (but i didn't, because it was too good).
If you ended this at chapter 100, it'd be terrific. And it'll be like a clifhanger.
All in all, it's a great story. Really different and refreshing. I wasn't expecting her to reincarnate. Keep it up (:

I APSOLUTELY FRICKEN LOVE YOUR STORY! like legit.. i spent like 3 hours reading all the chapters. PLEASE update soon.!

You just reached #1 on my list of favorite people (:

I care. Hooray!

To anyone who cares, I am SO sorry I haven't been able to post in about eight months. Complicated story short, I lost internet for awhile. I'm working on getting a laptop so I can post much more frequently.

I love this story!!!
I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Ahhh!! Haha
Its really great :)

That's awesome. :D

And Jaimee is my name, the maid has one less e than me though :D

lol Riley Carson is my little cousins name :)

its amazing

Very very beastly, update soon!

OMG I LOVE IT!!! Well no advise as of right now. I don't know if it's true and if it's what you planned on having Avenue's special gift be, but it seems to me that she can tell the future. I can't wait to find out her secret and understand what her and Snuffles were talking about. Your doing a wonderful job on this fanfic. I normally find something I don't like with fanfics, but not with yours. Can't wait for more chapters. Keep up with the good work!!!

So tell me what you think, give me advice to make it better, bounce around ideas, whatever you want! Just be nice.