I'll Make Love to You - Comments

Wow. Well, I can see that this story is quite popular.
And I can also see why. This story was positively wonderful. It was a bit cliche, but at the same time I think you handled that well and managed to carve out a unique plot with beautiful characters. The ending was wonderful, possibly my favorite part. :D

Feedback time! :D

To be honest, I was quite appalled when I got to the chapters where they were dealing with their problems and I just told myself, that it's gonna get better. This was the reason I asked you for a head up first just in case. I'm a sucker for happy endings. To say that I am very much grateful to have found you is an understatement. I like how you tackled serious issues but still yet managed to deliver it in a way that the reader wouldn't cringed or something, I love that it's balanced in every aspect. Not too much in any way and that makes it so amazing and light to read.

The ending is just perfect and making the parents acceptable of the relationship just added up to the awesomeness. :)

Okay, I just finished Chapter 11 and I can't help but comment. They're so cute, how Rain still have his innocence in a way, and how Damien acts so possessive and protective but not in a creepy way, or maybe the stalking was really creepy, I just know that before they finally enjoy everything shit's gonna go down first. Uh oh. xD

oh goodness, did i enjoy this.

havent read all of it yet, but i just feel like saying that i got a little teary-eyed when i saw rain's pic
because the boy who you chose to be him is dead.
i don't even know why i'm crying, cuz it's not like i know..er, knew the guy.

lanfdsak;ujia...ily<3

This story has been complete for awhile but I was going to read it again and I'm all o.O at the fact that you actually put the saying in the summary!!

Made my day...

You made it sound more pretty though xD

So i finally got around to readin the chapters i hadn't read :)
I loved it
The last two chapters were so cute
and made me smile so much
I loved the ending especially :)

I <3 this story! BRILLIANT ending!

I absolutely absolutely LOVED this story! Absolutely. One of my favorites EVER. Amazing. XD

awwwe sooo sweet im sad its over though! =(

AWWWWWWWWWWE <333
I LOOOOOOOOOOOVED THE CHAPTER!
AND THE WHOLE STORY!
AHHHHHHHHHMAZING <3

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
Please let therebe a second one?!?!?!?!
There has to be.
You could make it about their daughter.

loved it!!!!! ^_^

AWWWWW!!! Happily ever after!!! <3
I love it!!! soooo much. I'm going to miss them, but I don't think that I would be able to handle a sequel.
I just loved everything sooo much that I don't' know where to start. Sofi is just adorable, and I love that Damien's parents are soo great about everything. Even Tyler got his happy ending. <3!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!

I LOVED it!
Rain finally got the family he always wanted!
The only thing I don't like is the fact that it ended!
I'll miss this story so much
Love Bri :D

it was really good, I loved it..so happy that he found the family and happiness he was looking for

i'm goign to miss this story
i was really good

awesome ending to an awesome story !!! C:

Awhhhh<333
That was absolutely adorabibble<3
You did a fantastic job(:
And the ending was super duper cute ^-^
(Cue the NeverShoutNever! xD)
Anywayssss.
I ish gonna miss this. :(
-Sniffles-
But oh well. ^.^

I'm going to miss this story SO much! T-T
I loved it. This whole story. :')
I'll probably read it again, soon. :']