Junior Marauder - Comments

peter quill. (4975)

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I had to comment this one, Potter ftw

Anywho; I love your narrative. It flows so well, and your characterisation is wonderful. And I loved the humour.

“Any news yet? And what in the name of Merlin’s pants are you doing standing outside the room in which your currently sexless junior marauder is being born?”

^That has to be the best line in the whole thing. The idea of Merlin’s pants made me think of something funny :’] |:

Anyway; a fantastic story. Really enjoyed it.

March 25th, 2010 at 12:17am

MagicalMemories (100)

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Hilarious as always! You should write more of these funny one-shots. Or full stories... You have the nack for making everything funny and sarcastic in your stories and that's what I like in them!

March 24th, 2010 at 06:34pm

hey sailor (100)

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I agree with Moonlit Midnight. Absolutely hilarious!

January 25th, 2010 at 07:58pm

Blood_Angel89 (100)

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I loved it are u going to update

January 10th, 2010 at 10:58pm

Moonlit Midnight (100)

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HAHA! That was hilarious, I loved it. ~<3

January 8th, 2010 at 12:11am