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  • permanentdeclaration

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    This is amazing, Hannah :D
    August 1st, 2010 at 04:50pm
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    Wow someone's jealous....
    Haha I loved when Jason yelled YES! in class just because he doesn't like to sing.
    Awe I love how Nick wanted Mallory to sit with him :)
    He is just too adorable! :D
    Please update soon! :)
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:17am
  • alice liddell.

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    I loved the tension when Jason called Mallory an 'ice queen'. :)
    Update soon.
    August 1st, 2010 at 05:21am
  • burningchances;

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    I still hate Nick.
    I love Mallory cause she doesn't like Nick to.
    But it was a good chapter Hannah.
    You're such a talented writer.
    August 1st, 2010 at 03:50am
  • Insane Reality;

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    Loved it (: can't wait for more!
    August 1st, 2010 at 03:11am
  • glitter in the air;

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    Ahhh I just started reading your stories and now I'm obsessed!! Keep writing, girl... this is absolutely amazing!! :)
    July 21st, 2010 at 11:41pm
  • x3lisaa

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    Hannah! I am loving the vivid description you put into this baby. And I really do like how you are taking your sweet ol' time with the story line. I really like how it's not rushed at all. =) I look forward to reading more.
    July 12th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • burningchances;

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    Wait I'm confused.
    Nick knows Mallory why did he just look at her?
    July 11th, 2010 at 10:57pm
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    Whoa seemed like Emma was pretty jealous there.
    Haha I loved the part at the end where they laugh at the skater, karma does suck :)
    Update soon please :) :) :) :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 10:20pm
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    I should get a shout out for reading this right away ;)
    July 11th, 2010 at 05:50pm
  • Insane Reality;

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    Love it!!! Haha :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 08:37am
  • swell

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    Aww, the way you portray Nick is so adorable!
    And yay for them finally meeting :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • alice liddell.

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    Okay well, I'm happy that Nick and Mallory have met :)
    Can't wait for more.
    July 11th, 2010 at 04:29am
  • swell

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    Honest opinion? Erm..
    I LOVE IT.
    It is a little slow for the beginning but I still enjoyed it all the same.
    I loved how you finished it, with the fourth boy.
    And I also love how Nick J's in it. I need some Nick J in my life <3
    June 30th, 2010 at 08:54am
  • chekov.

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    :D i'm going to read this.
    because i love nicholas,
    i love mallory already,
    and because your writing is great.

    upppppdateeee soooooon, yesplz. :)
    June 27th, 2010 at 08:42pm
  • SeeUInTheDark;

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    I like this a lot!!
    Please update soon :)

    Mandee.
    June 27th, 2010 at 08:19pm
  • keepthislovealive

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    oooooooh i like this so far (:
    i'm excited :D
    June 27th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • quiet storm.

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    I think this is a great start and I'm really excited to see where it'll go.
    You're an amazing writer so I hope you update soon.(:
    June 26th, 2010 at 10:02pm
  • hollywood hearts;

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    oooh I like it :]
    Update soon?
    June 26th, 2010 at 09:57pm
  • permanentdeclaration

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    Katelyn is leaving love! Let's see...Nick story I presume? Cool, cool. Your writing is magnificent as per usual. I love this.
    :D
    June 26th, 2010 at 04:34pm
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