Fingerprints - Comments

The layout was very pretty, but the image was very low HQ and the links were so light pink that I could hardly read them. However, I can read the actual writing, and that’s what’s most important, so disregard my comments about the layout if you wish. ;) First, I want to say that I love the POV. I love how you made it like it was someone talking to another person or maybe writing a letter to them. There were a few spelling mistakes here and there (I know you said to go ahead and point them out, and I can’t resist. ) that a quick read-through would catch. All grammatical and spelling technicalities aside, let me mention just say this… I cannot even begin to describe how…how…

I can’t even cry because it hurts so much.

I went through the exact same thing – exact, aside from the storybook part. And I kept thinking about the supposed “friend” throughout the entire thing, and it made me ache so bad.

This was so…simple. Simple but powerful and so, so real. I can see that it’s hit home with a few other people too.

You…this has astounded me.

Wow! That was so pretty! It was so sad but it was absolutely brilliant! It's really, really brilliant

That was beautiful!!

Wow, this is really good. It's beautiful. It's so sad though, because it's so realistic. I mean.. I believe I've been through this...or about to...
Anyway, I really loved this. It's amazing.

This really was a beautiful piece. It was sad, and almost made my cry, it was written very well. I liked how the beginning was like all happy and things started to take a turn. Slowly but surely. A very heartfelt piece, I think this is a masterpiece ;) Wonderful job

this was really beautiful. I think you chose a good topic to write about since so many people can relate to it. It makes it easier to get attached to your characters.

I really liked this, awesome job. It was really beautiful and welll written. Loved it.

I really liked this : ]
It was so sad, but amazing
I was almost crying
Awesome job :D

This is so sad. I had tears in my eyes. It's so heartfelt and it's terrible that this happened to you.
Great story. :D

This brought tears to my eyes, honestly. It reminded me of how my best friend and I used to be. I was always the boring one and she was the wild child. She's calmed down now, but this brought back serious memories.

It is gorgeously written, plus the background, although only plain pale pink, is beautiful as well. Brings a light, airy, candy feeling to such a sad tale.

Good luck in my contest! :]]

This brought tears to my eyes, honestly. It reminded me of how my best friend and I used to be. I was always the boring one and she was the wild child. She's calmed down now, but this brought back serious memories.

It is gorgeously written, plus the background, although only plain pale pink, is beautiful as well. Brings a light, airy, candy feeling to such a sad tale.

Good luck in my contest! :]]

Honestly, that made me cry. Mainly because it was personal for me to read. But, despite how depressing that was, I loved it.