The Secrets of Emerald City - Comments

so amazing! i was hooked! make it into a full story please!

This is so beautiful, I would(and I'm sure everyone else would) love if you could write more on this world, or just anything really! You have me fascinated with your writing. :D

Love this! EPIC! :D Magical.

Whoa. That was epic. It was jsut beautiful, and to think, I almost forgot how much I liked fantasy stories! :D Haha.

Great job, and the writing is absolutely magical! :D Lovet it!

Now, THIS one made my week. (:

A lovely little fairy tale that I wouldn't mind reading more of.
Excellent work.

I love this story! I swear it is so well written and imaginative that it could be a fairytale from the Grimm Brothers (without the blood and bad stuff). I adore the city you created - I wanna live there! Super awesome job. :D

I loved it, so imaginative.

Cool! I don't think I read the summary very well and I didn't know that the secrets were actually creatures until I was in the story. It left me pleasantly surprised. Heehee. I like this story a lot. It's unique. I love the idea of talking rocks! They rock \m/ :)

^^^^^^ omg omg omg omg omg..... *faints*

This makes me smile, and just puts me in an all around good mood, I love it!

Its so different and unique from anything else on Mibba! Its so good!

Its so different and unique from anything else on Mibba! Its so good!

I really liked the originality and ultimate idea of this story. It could even turn into a full story, if you wanted it to. =)

Wow, that was great!! Five stars!! :) Totally a favorite one-shot of mine!

This was sooo interesting and well written and magical.

i absolutely loved it, it was really well written.

I definitely love it. Its very...well wonderful (: it could definitely become a full-on story.

Loved it! =P
Definately one of my top favourite one-shots!
Maybe you could write more about secrets? They seem to be pretty little things... =]

Sounds interesting! =]