An Everlasting Love - Comments

didnot are for the original ending...the alternate one made me cry like a baby.....it was amazing!

Damn this story was amazing. I loved both endings, but I preferred Chapter 31 to the alternate ending. Mainly because I like happy endings. Part of me wished that she didn't have the abortion because then she still would have a piece of Jacob if he were to die, but damn I loved this rendition a lot. Great job!

OMG, this was so good!! You had me crying for the most part though!! why did he have to die in the alternate ending though!! i love that you had two endings though, in other stories there's always a happy ending, this is a nice change from that!

love ur story!

wow, absolutley amazing story! the thing i love most about it was when bella and edward died....you are my hero =P hehe

I adored this story. It was absolutely brilliantly set up, beautifully written, and powered by raw emotion. You are a commendable writer with undeniable skill.

By the way, I preferred the alternate ending. It did what needed to be done.

Omg! This story is really good and so sad!! I cnt belive that jacob died like that! I so cried!!

Bella, Bella
that little girl is a child, always will be
she got what she deserved.
i mean she did basically kill her bestfriend and someones mate,
for her own pleasure.
Bella and Edward deserved to be burned,
for what they did.
They truly are monsters

your story was awesome. I freakin cried. I hate crying but it was sooooooo wow.

I was sobbing on the end AHMAZING BOTH endings were AHMAZING!!!

I cried through the whole thing.
No fucking joke.
My boyfriend was laughing at me when I told him why.
Well guess what Nick, fuck you!

This story was the best
I literally cried 8 times, no kidding
I liked the first ending, but I also liked the alternate ending because Bella died. That brought a smile to my face.
I really enjoyed reading this story
I enjoy reading all of your stories
You never dissapoint
LOVED IT <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

I just found this story and really like it. I like the first ending better. I beleive in happy endings.

i cried like a bitch in the alternate ending. ):

I loved it. I have to say it is one of the best written stories I have ever read. I think I liked the second ending better. Idk why, I think Bella's death had a huge part in it though. lol.

All I can say to all of that is WOW
and I agree most parts are better than the actual Twilight Saga
Jacob seriously needs to get himself together, I can't believe he's still hung up on Bella
That needy clingy bitch
UPDATE SOON =)

This Is Really Good =]
Its Amazing I Think You Wrote Parts Of This Better Than The Actuall Twilight Saga :O

Xo.

Thats the way making love should be.
the end of that chapter was very passionate.
Beautiful, love.

wow, sex o0n the beach, that was beautifull, i beleive you have a real talent as a writer :D
update soon love x

YAAAY There finally together
This chapter was so beautiful
UPDATE SOON =)