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  • magonda.

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    This is my favorite story yet!
    January 1st, 2012 at 06:21am
  • reverendsynvengeance

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    This story deserves way more! It's amazing. I love how you go into really deep detail but still keep certain things secret. I can't wait for the last chapter.

    Update soon!
    January 11th, 2010 at 10:40pm
  • the reverend.

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    I loved how realistic you made the point of view. It wasn't like "Oh jeez, that would never happen."

    'hiding from her and thinking about how to get rid of this girl.' That made me laugh, I could just imagine it XD.

    I like the length, it's a good, strong, first chapter, with not too much information but not too little. It doesn't overload your mind, which I like. It made me want to know what was coming next. Though, if you wish you can enter the whole thing into the contest :]

    Plus, I'm subscribing, I love it!
    Good work :)
    January 8th, 2010 at 09:44pm
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