I am a Goth Cheerleader - Comments

So I made it to the 5th chapter then stopped. :(
I have some constructive criticism. One, maybe you should work on your grammer. I like your idea, but your poor grammer makes it hard to follow. Consider some editing? Two, the plot seems to run on, and not make much sense.
I apoligize if I was harsh in any way.

Awesome update! ;) I really want to see what happens with her love life, haha!

Haha, very cool, I really like it! That Marius dude is a fucking wuss. He left her because of a rumor, and he said he loved her?! What a dick. But, yeah, that Lestat guy seems awesome, he was wearing a misfit t-shirt on the blind date! XO If that would happen to me, I would fucking flip and talk about it through out the whole damn date. Haha, I'm a big flirt! XD

New reader :) I love this story, it has a lot of good content. Update soon? :D

I love this story. It's great.
:D

this is awesome
i can totally relate to some of it

Being a goth cheerleader actually sounds like fun. A little, anyway. XD

You have really good ideas, I just think you should put some more detail, you know? its like we started at six ended at 7. Can't you put just a little more between that?
I'm not trying to be mean, I just want you to know what I think.
Sorry if I offended you an any way.=(