The Drug Years - Comments

haha her family makes me laugh

Very funny chapter "Offer taken back,"

I love this :)

yay more chapters. I adore Quinton.
I love how you took something so simple and made it into a moment for quinton and lacey.
Great chapter.
More soon please(:

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cute, sad, he's really nice, funny

Haha saying no..who the hell says no these days, normally boys are begging bt he said no cause it was out of anger...pssshft anyways love it!!!

I laughed at the chicken nuggets part. I totally did not see her 'rents coming home. Wow akward! XD
Update soon :)

very cute and funny

Keep it up and I agree with EverRose, take your time with the story. (: Updatee soon :D

Oh! One more thing. I really wish you would have put Grace in the character page. I'd love to see her there.

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Ok so I read this whole thing. I'm going to tell you what I like and disliked, mkay?

Dislikes:
1)Mistakes.
Some of the chapters have misspelling/grammar problems. Those are easy to fix. Just go back and re-read it aloud to yourself and you should find the mistakes easily.

2) For me personally I don't like the straight up descriptions of characters.
Like hey it's Lacey. She has short black hair, etc. Try to work it in, in their actions. Like for example. Quinton ran a hand in his back chin length hair... The straight forward description is a bit over-done.

3)I think some things could have been worded differently.
I'd put an example of what I mean but I'm on my phone so I can't really do that. >_< Anyways! yea, some of things could be worded differently. When I was reading this often times it seemed a little awkward because of the way you were wording things.

4)I didn't like the layout.
I mean it's pretty, but it doesn't go much with the story. Your story is called The Drug Years don't you think it should do something with drugs or falling in love as the characters seem to be doing? Just a thought.

5)The story is a bit rushed.
Obviously you point out in the story that they fell in 'love' in just a short amount of time but take the time to describe things. Like maybe her surroundings or something. That should make the story not so rushed,

Likes:

1)In the first chapter I absolutely love the introduction in the very beginning. I defiantly don't see that a lot in stories, and I wish I did.

2)The different points of view.
They are great. You just don't hear Lacey's side of the story. and Quinton seems a bit unstable. You wouldn't see that if it was just Lacey's point of view.

3)The Twilight references.
I absolutely adore those. I laughed when Lacey's like "Don't pull that Twilight crap with me," and when she asked when if Quinton was a vampire. Ah, dear. XP

4)Your writing style is very proper.
I like that. You don't use the usual writing that others do. you take the time to type out all the words. Sometimes I wish you wouldn't when some of the characters were talking but hey it's still good.

5)Quinton.
Obviously this plot line has been used before but you take it to the next level. Quinton is quite a character. He has the obvious drug problems and is willing to change for the girl he claims to love. That's the usual part. But the difference is that he still has another girl. Sort of. I haven't read that in one of these types of stories.

All in all I absolutely love this story. I'm going to whore the shizz out of this story. I honestly cannot wait to see were you take this. I just hope you don't kill of Quinton like all the other stories because if you do...I can't be held responsible for my actions. Just saying.

You've got yourself a subscriber and an everyday reader.

Hope you update soon.(: *Cough real soon cough*

Holy crap this going to be long -_-

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aww this is adorable. ok now update soon (:

haha, very nice chapter

Cute story, very interesting

I like this very much. (: <3
Updatee soon(:

This story is awesome :) Hmm.. I don't know if i'd be so accepting of the drug & Grace situation...
Looking forward to seeing how this situation works itself out :D
Keep updating!! -subscribes-

she seems very naive. i know if that was me i would not put up with his drug crap. but whatever anyways this id interesting so far. can't wait to see what will happen

your welcome for my wonderfulness and my wonderful comments (;
haha but yay shes not mad
ohh and he really likes her<3

yay he told her
sooo thats whats wrong. geeze he needs to stop the drugs.
woahhhhh theryre having sex

haha i love it.
ohhh whats wrong with him. its making me kinda sad haha