Opening the Window - Comments

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I may have already commented, but this is totally worth it. I personally found this inspiring in such a way I can't really describe. You brought in something... metaphysical, almost, to a story about a totally normal girl in a situation that happens to some of us. I loved the jumping, the theme of it. It was incredible, and that's what made this story unforgettable. It's definitely one of the best one-shots I have ever had the privilege of reading.
Her emotions were true, raw, blunt, and to the point. Everything was focused in on the story, and I didn't find myself getting distracted or anything.
Great job!!!!!!

woooooow.
i mean, at first i wasn't too sure about the jumping, i have to admit. But as the story progressed and truth arrived, i just.... woooow. it was great. i loved it. :D

wow this is really good :)
did she kill her self or what?
but anyway great story.