Undisclosed Desires - Comments

@ CourageKeeper
this turned out better than I really hoped...I actually miss this story..maybe I'll read a few chapters again! hehehe...it was really fun writing it :)

i really love seeing the other side of things <3

awww
i loved it! :)

: ] this is my favorite story.

p.s. but at least it was a happy farewell :))

ahah! i was right! the reason he keeps on pestering Lisa asking her if she were still in love with him is because he wanna know his status on her heart! :)) but it's cute though, 'cuz for a guy that is so full of himself, like him, is still worried that the girl he loves might not reciprocate his feelings.. :)
i really enjoyed reading the story from Oliver's point of view.. it's funny, sweet and cute.. :)
i found it funny when he calls Lisa a drama queen! haha.. but i agree with him though :))
i'm gonna miss them! and you, too ms. author! :)
i'm gonna miss the game, the teasing and the flirting.. i'm gonna miss the story, really.. :(
but oh well, everything has to end, including this fantastic story..
but it doesn't matter, 'cuz the points are, i've been entertained and i was able to witness one such cute love story between two people from two different worlds..
thank you.. you really have a talent on writing, girl! keep it up!!
it's so sad., this is finally goodbye.. :( goodbye to Lisa and to Oliver :(
thank you again and take care!!
-olisarus-

I really liked it! and all the prequels too! your a good writer!!

ok well that was excellent! I really enjoyed reading this ... series? is that the right word? any way, its sad that it is over, but it is really good. seriously. anyway, keep writing, i hope you start another story soon. LATER!!!

i can't believe its all over. you must carry on with lisa and oliver, like seriously, i order you too! haha. but yeah, i think you should, everyone loves them. it was so nice that you did these two chapters of oliver's point of view, thats so nice to get a understanding of his view! he thought about her a lot, so cute. their relationship is like almost so real, its insane. you're such an amazing writing, you should so carry on with lisa and oliver, we all want to know what happens to them! you can't leave it like that, that is not the end of them, no no no! you must carry it on otherwise i'll die because i wont have my daily dose of oliver, do you understand?! :D carry on! everyone wants you to, i know it! :DD

yay i just read chapter 2, it was awesome, especially the ending, it was soo sad yet happy at the same time.lol, ime talking all weird now.hehe...more sequel?? =)

Aww Oliiii!
He is such a sweetheart...honestly. (:
I'm so upset that this story has ended...it was truly amazing.
And i agree with the above comment.
Pleaseeeeee write another Oli story (: haha

This story is amazing, and you're amazing. I'm going to miss reading it.
<3

I am so sorry for not commenting the previous chapter.
I've been a real dick lately.

Let me start by saying that this chapter was making me really nervous, because I knew once I was finished reading I'd feel like shit, even though I knew this day would be coming. I just never wanted this story to end, as selfish as it may sound.

You are amazing. Fucking amazing.
No lie there man, no lie.

Things just won't be the same anymore. I’ve become used to waking up to an update from you. I just don't know what I'm going to do, now. It's going to feel like a little piece of me is missing!

You should write a new Oliver story? Yes, yes? You know you want to! No one can deny that boys face. Heh, sorry, a girl had to at least try!

Once again, she used sex to distance herself from me and from her feelings.

I never realized that was what she was doing!
I'm such an idiot.

Even if she seems unsure, I’m sure enough for the both of us.

You are a pure genius. It's ridiculous these ideas you come up with and the things you write.

You did a very excellent job with this, the sequel, and the prequel for that matter.
This story and you will always have a place in my heart.

I loved that you did this.
It gave me a better understanding on what Oliver was feelings.
And I love this story even more.
I'm sad it's over.

<333

i'm so sad it's all done now!!!!! i wanna cry i love reading all of these!!!! =[ but it was so interesting to read from oli's POV! haha! anyways i love you and i love your writing! thank you for entertaining me! =] <333333

Woo! Pure brilliance.

So, I was wondering, is that the end? Is Lisa's and Oli's story over or will you continue on with it?

i'm so sad this is over ;( but it was so amazing! i hope you make another oli story :) or even a tom sykes one ;)

God Oliver is sexy in that picture you have up <333 This story is bloody brilliant. Update, yes ?

I loved it!
I'm so excited it's in his POV (:
Can't wait to read more!

aw yay. i love how this was in oli's POV. and now i am REALLY excited.

i loved it :)