That was beautiful, the emotions were crystal clear, the images were set and focused. I just, really liked it. You can tell that this is a very personal story.
Wows, what a jack. That was a great story. You had a great way of writing it. It's like you could almost feel what she was feeling. But ya, great job :)
That was..different. The emotions were very clear, you could see the memories replaying in her mind, and feel her heart breaking over again. Then, you find out he's just some creep womanizer. This almost made me laugh. Good work.
I loved it.
Unconditionally. ;)