My boy/werewolf promblem - Comments

Hey!!! You have a good story coming along here =DD
But um....
YOUR CHAPTERS ARE REALLY SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD
Write more ASAP!!!

I Really really really like your story aren't ya goona continue it?

Well I have some tips and then I will be on my way.

1st. It would make people happier if the chapters were longer.
2nd. Make sure you check the spelling and punctuation.
3rd. Keep writing. Practice and you will get better.

Good story.
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Oooooooooh Matthew is so sweet! I love it! Can't wait for the next few chapters xD

this is realy good.i like it

well, aside from the plethora of spelling/grammar mistakes, i must say.
this is dull.
2 chapters in and there are already so many 'twilight' allusions dancing around my head. this is literally borderline plagiarism.

I don't usually like reading werewolf stories but this seems interesting ^.^

Ohh this is good!! I can't wait for more! Matthew sounds hot :D
*subscribes*

i love ur story it's amazing.... please update rlly rlly soon ^^

I think it's a good story so far. : )
Maybe you should make the chapters longer ?

love it so far. MORE SOON, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!