Big mistake - Comments

Why thank you :) lol the grammar's kinda an issue because I typed this whole story on my iPod lol xD. I made it sad because I'm kinda tired of reading too many stories where the guy does something wrong, and then never Learns anything because the girls are always peachy with whatever happens. Not that that never happens but... Now I'm babbling haha nevermind :)

i actually really liked it. besides a few grammar things, i enjoyed it. sad, obviously, but well-thought out.