love it!just that I find it a liitle boring to read the same thing two times just in diferent POV's! I'm not saying it's bad!I love the story!is just an advice! :D more pleasE?
It was nice to see Matt's POV during the trip to the mall. And I wonder what got to Cammy... The poor girl doesn't really get to spend time with her dad and feels like he just buys her love; it's gotta be tough dealing with that. But I'm just wondering why she seemed to act a little funny when he didn't let her use her card for the food... Maybe I'm just being dense and missed something. But I enjoyed the update and I'm looking forward to reading more!