It's really been a while since you updated this story, so I'm glad you had the time to do it now.
Wow, loved the theological and philosophical aspect to this chapter! To any city person she must seem like a lunatic but in reality she has her own beliefs and problems as well as a really firm view of right and wrong.
I'm really curious as to how things will develop further on in the story. As of now I have no clue. It's really great that it's so unpredictable. I can't wait to read more. :)
That was such a great update! And I loved that last line. It was just a perfect thing for her to say; it just fit so well. I really enjoy this story and I hope to see you update whenever you have the time. I'm lookin' forward to seein' how you get the boys in there.
I loved the update! I'm glad to see that you had time to update. No need to apologize for delays because we all know what it's like to be busy. I really wanna see what's going to happen next and I'm still in love with the fact that you have the boys of MCR in this. Haha.
Love the update Mikey and Frank are an item, aye? I really love how the guys are wanting her to stay with them - it's like they want to keep her safe...
Ah it took me way too long to read this new update; I fail. Anyway it's AWESOME. The MCR part was so amusing. Frank is soooooooo their Johnny ;) I thought they were Avenged, because, five guys and then I read the names I was like ".......wait what?!" until I realized XD Looking forward some more!!! :D
Hehe, you update this story so fast! I'm loving it! Haha, her comment about Frank's gayness was funny and then the way she took their crazyness. Yeah, I really love this story! I can't believe that someone tried to drug her. But then again, that's what happens to young ladies who are alone in a big city. Frank is hilarious. Such a funny man, that guy. I adore him already.
But I love that so far this story shows that there are nice people out there. Although, I think that it'll all come crashing down sooner or later... >.<
Amazing, as always, and I can't wait for the next one! <3
Thanks for giving me the heads up about this story! I really like it; it's just so interesting and I am in love witht he way you are writing it! I'm totally looking forward to more!
I ADORE this character! Seriosusly she is so cynic and pessimistic! Haha, I love sharacters like that. Plus, she's so realistic and down to earth...ahhh, love her!
This was a seriously funny chapter in a sort of a brooding way. I liked it though. Haha, she's already seeing the ugly side of the world! It's DECEMBER! Holy crap, is she stupid?! Haha, I can't believe her, for a rational person, I would have thought....haha, that's just crazy.
Now I'm extremely curious as to who's driving the car! I can't wait to find out! <3
"I could always sing to myself, but… no thank you I had enough rain without even asking for it in the first place" I love that quote. So, you didn't tell me you were writing let alone posting a new story :( I still love it just so you know. It's different. Way different. Can't wait 'till "things" start happening. xoxo
I really like this already. The way you open the story fascinated me and drew me in. I love how this story goes on, and on, and on. It's really amazing. The banner is pretty too...