Homepage › Stories › A Dream Gone Bad › Comments

A Dream Gone Bad - Comments

  • Jemsparkle

    Jemsparkle (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    Pakistan
    Ooooooh I liked.I liked how you included the shark.It's like you read my mind and included it in your story.I was just thinking about Jaws,lol.Your writing is really great.
    <3
    January 11th, 2010 at 11:19am
  • Road To Heaven.

    Road To Heaven. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    Its good! =]
    Please get more people to enter and ill contact u at the end of the contest
    January 11th, 2010 at 01:23am
Homepage › Stories › A Dream Gone Bad › Comments