Smiles Fade to Red - Comments

I love this. Very nice!!!! Kinda creepy. The ending is...Perfect.
Much Loce
MTOL

I actually liked that. As the overall idea is a bit cliche, the way it was executed seemed unique. I liked that it was emotional, but not entirely too painful to read. There was just enough detail. The last line makes the story. Her final decision is ultimately left up to the reader to infer, which leaves a little hope. It was short and poignant.