The Wrong You Like - Comments

garrett's line at the end though >>>> seriously, really good, glad i read this :)

Lmao. I loved all the cursing John did, because we all know he can drop 'F bombs' like
Nobodies business.
The proposal was 'awe' worthy and I could so picture him doing that in real life one day,
If he can learn to be less shy and awkward, hahaa.

"Aw, John's finally gonna lose his virginity!" Garrett cooed

Lmao. Garrett would say something like that.
And when Evan asked "they think you're a virgin?" if I had to laugh, thinking back to the
Prequel and then this.
I loved this, but I'm so, so sad it's over.
But it had to end sometime, right? Sigh. Lol.
But I adored this to pieces! (:

awww....i loved the ending!

Hahaa. I can't even say anything about Evan, because I think if I were her,
I'd give John another chance. I did love that little threat, though.
And John being really concerned over losing his dick, made me 'lmao', literally. (:
I really hope John keeps his shit together this time.

Oh, shit.
Well, even though I hate that she's in the hospital,
I'm glad that it happened, because now hopefully she'll get off of all the shit she was
Taking. The whole scene made me laugh. Especially Garrett and Pat, who always
Seem to be clueless. And Pat would stay in the kids' section of the waiting room,
And know about them giving out free kool-aid. Hahaa.
I can't wait to see what John has to say!

what the heck!?!?!?! you can't just leave it like that! update soon please!

Ummm . . . WHAT?!
Lol. What the fuck, Cornelius?
Did he really just leave her in the hotel, and then not contact her for two months?!
I would have punched that boy in the face! Lol.
And Evan 'dieting' for her career, is sad, but also reality.
I can't believe that Emily is 'sort of' dating John.
I mean . . . seriously? What in the fucking world?! Lol.
I can't wait for more!

oh man....i was so not expecting that to happen, can't wait to see what's going to happen next!!!!

Woah, things just got insanely interesting,
I wonder what'll happen next :)

Whew! I'm glad that John didn't keep up with the whole mad act,
because he would have been a huge hypocrite if he had.
And they're so adorable. They're in a good place right now,
And it sucks that she has this big decision to make.

Lmao. I don't know why, but Chanel reminds me of that tiny,
Asian lady from The Incredibles. Hahaa! (:
And I'm glad she got the deal, but it's obviously going to
Cause some drama with her and John, now!
I can't wait for more! (:

Lmao. I loved this chapter! It was hilarious.
Halvo is such a cutie, but a weirdo at the same time, lol.

. . . we walked to the front of the store seeing Halvo with a lollipop in his mouth swirling around in the rolly chair . . .

Is it weird that I can picture that so clearly in my head? Lol.
Anyways, I can't wait for more! (:

Hahaa. Kennedy's outburst at them having sex cracked me up! I mean, really,
Did he think they wouldn't?!
And that ending with Halvo made me smile, because he would do/say something like that! Lol.
Andddd, happy belated birthday! (:

happy late birthday, darling!
i love this chapter!
Update soon? <333

I love that Kennedy pretty much didn't think they wouldn't be having sex. Silly brothers.

Btw, happy belated birthday :)

Three things, first:

1) "No law is man hungry, man get food," Lmfao. I love Garrett!

2) "Why is my girlfriend crying?" I 'awed' at John for saying that. (:

3) 'Halvo's laugh a little mouth-breathier' This made me laugh!

Okay! Now, I think Justin was a dick for saying those things to her, when he didn't know what really went down. And that's hard for me to say, because I love me some Just Justin! Hahaa. But, I'm glad the guys came to her defense! And I loved, loved, loved the ending! (:

Poo on Justin. Totally uncalled for.

oops. ^^that was me commenting.. i forgot i was on someone elses acocunt. heh ;D
anyways. yes. that was still me.

i love this update ;D
it's so cute. and oh so grand.
update soon ? i would love it :D

kennedy taking responsibility for his baby?
awww!
john being all cutesie with evan?
double aww! :D