Honestly - Comments

i love this so much!
I wish there was more to it or a sequel!

Aw! There's hurt going around for everyone, isn't there? Very sad story, though, again, you portray emotion so well I'm not sure if I even care that it was sad. XP

Great story!

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Woahh O: Why didnt Tom Tell Lilly sooner! Aww, i wanna see whats gunna happen between Oliver and Lilly, better yet, seeing IF anything happens between tom and lilly. Lilly prolly feels bad now, for not waiting for tom, or listening to him. its good that they got there thoughts out to each other to think about now though. I love the begining part, about where hes entering. that part was amazing! i love the description of the scene and his feet on the floor xD that part was amazing, really amazing. Does tommy Love lilly? O: Ohh that would be so adorable! Oliver's out of the picture by now, I wanna see how mad he is at tom, or how much he trys to fight for Lilly back, or does he not even want her anymore?

xD Amazing. Lovee thiss One shot ;] Thanks for the shortt story. Pleasure reading it.

this was amazing! i love the fit between tom and lily, gosh. im glad that tom told her that oliver was cheating on her, i didnt see that one coming, i thought he was going to tell her that he loves her even though towards the end that was obvious. you're writing is so amazing, like honestly, i loved this! it was amazing. it makes me want to write some one shots really badly, i think i might just do that actually, gosh! :D

I loved this story. Your new paragraph was fantastic--and I liked that it was 3rd person and then the rest of the story transitioned into 1st. Great descriptions and dialogue.

I'm glad with the way you ended it. It wasn't very cliche and predictable. It was a great ending. It was like he matured, and he realized something that he should have a while ago--like he grew up. The story had purpose to it.

I'm not much of a BMTH fan, so I don't really know much about them, but you gave enough detail and description and background for me to understand your characters.

All in all I enjoyed it.

Great job! :)