January 13th, 2010 at 10:21pm
Oh I really like this!
I like how you changed it after my comment ;) haha
But yeh. I love the story idea, i've not read this before. So many ideas are repeated in fanfics, but this is original. I like! More please! :) x
I love your idea and it's nicely written too
Poor Jay though, being beaten up by Sean