A Ransom Note, A Famous Hostage, 2 Bad Guys & The FBI! What More Can You Ask For? - Comments

Hey... so, I just read the author's note. I don't mind your decision about not continuing it. I would love it if you did, but you don't have to, especially if you've lost interest. :/ I can't help with cowriting any stories right now, but if I could, I would help you with you with it. Sorry. For what it's worth, I loved what you had of the story. :) It was great. :) And... well... I guess that's it. I don't mind if you don't continue, but I would love it if you did. :D

It's kind of a fast story. o_o But I like it.

Just like Breathless Tallie. Put more into it. And with the name is Put it into someone POV and then us readers know the feeling behind the person.

I like it, but I hope you don't mind me putting a few pointers out. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just trying to help. Instead of doing: (Nick & Emma Kiss), you should write out the action, as to say use sentences saying it, like Nick and Emma kissed or Nick and Emma exchanged a kiss, offically making them husband and wife. Also, when people are talking, you should have quotes. Like instead of Priest: I know pronounce you husband and wife., you should have, The Priest announced, "I now prounounce you husband and wife." Again, I don't want to sound mean, I just wanna help you out :) I really like this story and think it has great potentional. Keep it up :)

Decided to check out your story since you read mine. :) I just read the first chapter and I love it so far! :D I want to know what happens! :) And I know that you want people to guess but I'm not so good at that so I'll just wait for the next update. :D Can't wait for the next chapter! I love it, so update soon! :)

It was a good start! Update soon!