Hey! I love the story! It's amazing :) I'm kinda glad that Ted and Dan know about them, I mean in other stories like no one ever knows anything and after a while it gets kinda annoying but you totally changed that! And is it just me, or does something need to happen with Alex? I don't know what, but I think he needs to be in the story more... :)
Ahh I know what you mean. School, dance, and family take up my time so I can't write much :/ But anyways, I like that she plays COD.... and kicks ass at it. :)
Wow. I totally forgot about this story -_-. Anyways, that was an amazinggg chapter. I read in the car on the way to school and was smiling like the whole time. I swear my Dad thinks I'm a retard now (also because after all that...I started rocking out to.....Boogie Wonderland.....o_o) Anyways, UPDATE WOMAN!!!!!!!
Hey. lots of girls play video games!! That's funny though. Dan and Ted crack me up!! :D!! hehe. I really like Alex now. the stepmother is slimy though. I don't like her.
so i was just looking for stories and i ran across yours. the title drew me in and then the whole "student/teacher" relationship made me like it even more and then to make it even better BAM you hit me with some great writing. in simpler words good writing and update more please
Soo I don't know if I've ever commented on this story before buut I've been reading it and I have to say that it is amazing! I cannot wait to read more! :)