First thing, gorgeous layout, I love the background picture as well as the snow flakes I think it's really pretty, the only thing that I'd have to pick on is the snowflakes, as wonderful as they are and how they match the story they make the text a little hard to read.
Other then that I thought it was wonderfully written, the summary it self got my attention for sure, I was originally just going to read the first chapter but the plot's addicting, you write really well, I spotted a couple grammical mistakes here and there, missing letters, quite a few near the end of the sex scene. So I was only going to read one chapter but i'm already on chapter six I think it's going to be awesome, I'm subscribing.
I'm loving this, I started reading two days ago, right before a concert, but I would have finished it if I wasn't so busy. This hooked me. Update soon!
yay...UPDATES!!! Glad you went with 2 in the end, even if 1 was cute with the octopusses and all, i doubt a 4 yr old boy would still want octopusses all over his room =D Hiatus.... =(