Old Enough - Comments

This is an amazing story, the detail is great as well as the layout. There were a couple of mistakes but it was acceptable, seeing as your writing flows nicely. Great job, I think you should continue. (:

I really wonder how this story is going to turn out, it's really unique^^

I'm speechless. Like what Tragedy Abi said, the emotion is amazing. The way you wrote this... So amazing. I'm at a loss for words, really. From the beginning to the end I was intrigued and fascinated with your words. You should definitely write more.

I'm surprised this doesn't have more comments.
The layout and the detail are lovely.<3

My mind only hitched on one thing though;
I pasted by my sleeping mother
^ I'm pretty sure you don't need the 'ed' on past. That kind of chopped up the flow you had going.

I liked this. :)

Love the update.
Tofu? Gross...

This is so depressing.
The emotion is amazing in it.
I can't wait for the first chapter

I really like it. Very well expressed.