So I really only had time to read the prologue and and the first real chapter.
I like the idea for the story and everything, but it kind of just moves way too fast for my taste. I could possibly be your co author, but I wouldn't want the way that I write to intrude on your ideas and whatnot...
HAHAHAH! OMG! I just read the first chapter. "Pawprinting." That cracked me the hell upp! This is a great start and I am so sorry for being so late on commenting and all that jaazz. I'll read more of it tomorrow! I'm excited too! :)
I think what you are doing for this story is great!!! I think that maybe since sam commanded that she can't phase maybe this time she can leave and sort out her thoughts or maybe find some else.
Oh. My gods. That was simply amazing, it made emotions surface in me that I thought had gone for good! Amazing what good litterature can do, huh? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
Gah I love it! I need to see more Seth though! lol It's not about him I know but... He brightens things I think the way most fans portray him. Anyway way off topic! I love it and I can't wait to see more! Please update!