Oh I LOVE your new layout, as I've told you before. :D However, it was a bit hard to read, I had to highlight it to be able to read it better. Just change the font to a color more readable, and it will be perfect.
But WOW for that chapter! You & fluffness rule my world, do you know that?
love the fluffy stuff. but the layout background is cute, and love the purple, but the orange is pretty hard to read against it. maybe change the orange to white or black or something. i think white would look hot.
This story is way awesome! I love it so much! The plot line is really good and interesting and you have just the right amount of boysex to draw the dirty-minded people in. [aka me ;D] It's written well too. Win.Win.Win.
Only complaint. I really hate the background of the story. xD It's just my personal opinion about it, but yeah. I'm not diggin' it too much.
-a