Here's to You - Comments

That was pretty good. I liked it near the end the best when she fought back. :tehe:

This was amazing.
It's different, but that's what made it great.
I'd give your four thumbs up if I had four hands.
hahaha.

this story is just so amazing. i know this isnt exactly recent but still wanted to ask
huni do you wrote this from hmm personal experiance? just wondering really
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I just read this again and was thinking that I was having Deja Vu but it's ok, I've read it before. But it still rocks

That was really good.
It's amazing how you managed to write the hurt, pain and love into that.

"Here's to me calling off this war
Here's to me walking out that door
Here's to the only casualty. " < amazing way to end it

That was excellent.
It was simple, yet it had a level of total complexity.

=]
It was very good.

aw thats kick ass :P very well done

Awesome
theres not enough femmeslash on here
and zebrahead ftw

wow. this was great. you write great femmeslash. (:

Wow I see why it took two hours or more.
it was really fantastic!

woa this si awesome
simple yet holds alot of emotions
I love it

it was nice. :].

also, dead22,

LEARN. TO. SPELL.

OMG.
::cries:

ILYILYILY.

tht was really gd

Amazing, really. It was well-written, for sure.
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LoveDeathMadness.
--Laila.

^yeah it was complete different from what i normally read, but, i loved it!
it was very well written! i like the way you described everything ^^
good job^^
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i liked it.....very.....differnt than i have ever read. it was really good....really....really good.

Very dramatic and well-written- I like the way you described the 1st person's (?) thoughts whilke still remaining in her reality. Plus you used a great technique for skipping over time.