Paparazzi - Comments

You are brilliant, miss.

it's_electric is right. The way you made out Daphne is pretty funny. And Britney Spears scents are so intoxicating and sweet. The imagery was fantastic.

Gold star, my friend.

thankyou!

I like you for several reasons:
- you read my story :3
- you not only read my story, but commented, and it made my day!
- your comment was detailed, you like to critique with more than just the standard "I like this! moar!"

I am really liking this is far for a number of reasons, here are a few =)

-Posie is an awesome name
-I love how you make Daphine out to be. so funny.
-The reader can already tell you have got some good ideas down for your story and it makes us want to read more.
-your grammer is good as well as your spelling and that is super nice for the reader.

Good job! keep up the good work

Dude, high five to new stories!
It has a good start. Nice cliffhanger.
<3

thanks so much <3

I like the name which is what caught me I think I'll be reading this later! Good intro with characters