You're so descriptive and I love it! You blew my mind with this one. Anorexia is a serious problem but one thing that bothered me was the unrealistic ending. Your story said she only had two weeks to live and then a year later she's alive and recovered? It's a bit confusing. It would have had more of an impact if you had taken it to a funeral scene or something but other than that, I though it was amazing. You have a way of describing things where I actually feel I'm in your story and I can actually see what's going on. I love it!
April 21st, 2010 at 06:46pm