I like this story. Its starting off slow which I like. Some of the stories they meet and then bam two seconds later oh lets get married at least you're playing it out. Cant wait to see more.
came across your story and well.... dont get me wrong its really really good but theres not alot of zacky going on. and because of that it kind of seems boring. it would be nice to see whats going on with him. but all in all its a really good story. hope the criticism helped a little :)
Hehe, this is really interesting, seriously. Maybe it's because I'm just dying to know what's going to happen. :P I'm glad you updated so soon. I'm really curious as to what happened to make Melissa's dad worry about her hanging out with the team. And why is she so set on not getting involved with a baseball player? Love it and I can't wait for the next chapter!