I'm very sorry, I know that this comment is very VERY late, but I'd like to apologize. I really like this story, it makes me laugh a lot, which is good, because I like stories that make me laugh :) <3 I'm terribly sorry once again.
Oh my god Ciscas that was awesome ... u have to get ur friend to write more u guys are awesome!!!!!! Ily gorgious P.s. I want my invisable cookies give em to me tomorrow ... or else -.-
seven: WHOSE GOING TO UPDATE THIS??? Anyways, the descriptions of this chapter may even be better the other six after it. Wondering what's going to happen when the next chapter comes? Where's the rest of the guys?
six: Outfit's random, but cute. Loved her converses. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out. Descriptions were excellent also.
five: Still loving this more and more. Wondering when the rest of the guys are going to be introduced though *Johnny, Syn, and Matt again*? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
four: Awesome chapter. I actually have never heard that line "if the moon's brighter; good things are to come". Wondering what will they do? Can't wait to read and find out.
three: Liked how you wrote this out from when they were getting everything ready for the move, on the plane ride there, and the intro of the guys. Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.
two: You might want to find a different punishment for me then, cause I'm a fan of the boys. Also you probably meant inhaled, instead of exhaled. Other than that; excellent descriptions, great intro of the guys, and Bre's my favorite.
Sounds interesting. Saw that you forgot to add the 'a' in heard. Other than that; excellent descriptions and plot. Can't wait to read the next chapter.