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That was an awesome raddd one and only original story.
It's so sad it's a one shot - I'd love for you to continue, but
HECK - I love the flow of it all and everything.
You're goooooood :]

I really liked this. It was very original - the flow with which Ollivander spoke. And the way he spoke. I've only ever seen one book speak in the 2nd person (using "you" instead of "I" or "they" at least I think that's 2nd person, I can't remember for sure).
I also love the way you portrayed Luna. She's such an amazing character. And it is true, the way she's perceived as insane doesn't really matter because when you get right down to it, she's saner than most. lol. Very nice one-shot.


~adriana