KuroShiritsutantei - Comments

:XD Again Mae-Mae, this was awesome. I hope you know I rarely read stories on mibba, so one that catches my attention is very hard to find.
I love the way you portrayed Grell in the first half of this chapter.Shee seems mad yet at the same time I kinda want to hug her. Maybe I'm weird for saying that about some one who murders whores and has an unhealthy obsession with the colour red, but still,
Anyways, third chapter soon? :D I'd very much like you to contiune. :cute:

I THINK I LOVE YOU JUST A LITTLE BIT.

Sherlock Holmes makes me all tingly inside and even though I don't know much about the anime since I only watched the first episode (which this, of course, will prompt an all-out investigation, I'm fairly certain) I feel like you've gotten the essence of Ciel and Sebastian, as well as their rather odd relationship. There's a tension between them, but also an understanding of the rules and I think maybe even an underlying bit of mutual respect for each other's abilities.

Now, as for Holmes, I think you did an incredible job. He's such a tough character, at least for me, as you certainly know. RDJ's Holmes is very much the Holmes of the books, so basing it off of him is a fairly surefire thing. The way that Holmes simply threw his name out into the conversation, and then promptly pointed out all the minor things that Ciel hadn't thought of, was bang on. Plus the bit of cockiness, teheee, Holmes can be an arrogant ass and you just got that down too.

All in all, I'd very much like to see the second chapter. Love this, love you

This was awesome, Mae-Mae. You're a much better writer than you give yourself credit for. And if it's help, I fail it when it comes to Sherlock Holmes, so I have no idea about the character any more than he's a detective. (See, Em fails, not Mae -_-').
I like Ceil in this story so far, you've described both him and his personality very well.
Write the next chapter soon? =D