Where Our Hearts Lead Us - Comments

loved it! :)

Um update soon! I love this:)

Hanzal is from the Czech Republic. :] but I've never heard him in an interview, so I made it more like Russian. :)

Chapter one;
"than a witches tit....."
Hahaha, I found that hilarious.

Summary; You might need a bit more of description, some grammar mistakes.

Chapter two;
"strange cold scent "
You could have elaborated on this

"My heart catapulted into my throat and I smiled back at him".

Aww :)

Summary;
You could have made it a bit longer but on the other hand its good.

Chapter three;
'just knew I would wear out my voice by the end of the night....that sounded kind of perverted...'
It did indeed, but I liked it.

'He skated over toward us and put his hand on the glass. Stunned, I raised my own hand and put it up to his against the glass.'
E.T moment.

Summary; Quite nicely written, still short but good.

chapter four;
'He was almost late to get out of the box because we were flirting so much.'
Aww, thats sweet but a bit quickly paced.

'people to leave until an older man came over to us. '
PEDOPHILE. Oh wait

'I blushed so hard I thought my face would blow up. '
That wouldn't be a nice sight, but still, nice imagery.

Summary; Haha thats such a sweet chapter :)

Chapter Five;
'There was a gorgeous, sweet, famous man taking me out to dinner.'
That kinda make me think it was a bit too fast paced. They had never met before right?

"Sorry......I walk you up, now?"
I like his broken English. Is he Russian?

Summary;
I kinda liked that one, still fast paced though.
Tip; Pace it out a bit and tease us.

Chapter six;
'Martin's melted chocolate brown eyes.'
That's sweet :)

'Scotties attempts to woo Katie'
Hahaha :)

'I just had an orgasmic bite of cake! '
Ooh ;)

'I wanted to reach over and smooth the lines on his forehead out and kiss it better.'
Sweet!

Summary; that was such an adorable chapter.

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I'm subscribing.

This story is Stellar!!!
Your a great writer keep writing.
;)

O_O I so wanna cry. I love you two. xD

I like this.
And I think you should update ASAP. :]

Ahhh! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe
update soon! :D

I love this!!!!!! :)
update soon!