Take a Breath and Hold On Tight - Comments

John is awesome! HE LIKES HER. Yay!

Btw, it's not all one big beach, which is a shame.

I WANT TO CRY OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO CUTE AND SAD
AND FUCK JOHN FOR BEING CUTE
FUCK HIM.

oh....

I love how John always takes care of her. It's so cute and... Adorable!
And Death Cab... definately fits this chapter perfectly.
Gah! You need to update woman!

This is so adorable. I love it. Pleas update

if you want to keep the whole thing on from polyvore
just go to the button that says remove and put it on keep..if that makes sense haha
update soon!!!!!!!

My gosh, this chapter was amazing beyond words. And I listened to "Transatlanticism" while reading it. It just made the chapter just a little better and more emotional. But in the good way. I absolutely loved what John said at the end. It really shows how much he cares.

Update soon. (:

Aw. They are so cute!

god, I hope that never happens if I ever get drunk,aha.

Dang, you've just got some dang good stories, good lordy be!
Keep writing, and can't wait for the update! :D

POOR HARP!
first time I got drunk.. oh boy.

uhm for real can i just come in and beat Rory's ass?
She's a bitch and I don't appreciate it.

That last part literally brought tears to my eyes.
She's finally opening up and I think it really is like a hugeeee start for her.
Rory sucks though, why is she even with John?

GREAT UPDATE! I loved this!

OMG!
AWESOME pure genius.
Im tearing up already..

Hello, my name is Celina and this morning, a little after midnight, I subbied to your story. I've been up all night reading it and loving every word you wrote. I can tell you put so much effort into every little person, sentence and chapter. The storyline is amazing and realistic and the characters are believable yet not perfect. It's different and slightly difficult to read though Harper being that I am the total opposet of her. But I am so glad I stumbled across this story. I can't wait to read more.

So proud of Harper for everything in this chapter!

Plus, looks like Garrett stopped being a douche. Now it's this Rory that I don't like. As you can tell, I need one person in every story to dislike.

oh my, i wonder what this is going to lead to!
i love love love this! The part from her brother's diary is just perfect.
update soon!

AH! I have no idea what to say about this!
I bet Mister O'Callaghan is gonna say some cheesey pick up line or something when he sees Harper! haah!
Update soon, please?

I still can't get over how much I love this. It's so freaking adorable yet sad at the same time :P

I love the journal :)

Gosh, this story is so amazing. I can't wait to see how Dalton plays into everything. And I really hope that John can get her to open up more so she doesn't have to keep everything bottled up.

Update soon (:

I WAS ALL SMILES AND GIGGLES THROUGH THIS MHAHAHHAA.